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PostSubject: Satanic Shift   Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:39 pm

Name: Satanic shift

Description: your body morphs into a form that renders you completely overwhelmed causing your flesh to burn away and leave only that of a demon.

Effect: x3 PL, stackable

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:45 am

Ummmm....I'm really not sure about this......I'm really not hot on the absorption thing

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:59 am

perhaps a fourth would be better.

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 12:53 pm

I don't think it's a quantity issue

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 1:21 pm

alright, well if that part was to be taken out would the rest be fine?

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:04 pm

I honestly think that you should change the abilities altogether. I'm not keen about a transformation that makes everything stronger.

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:20 pm

well it is an ultimate ability, but if you think its best.

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:21 pm

Yeah.....sorry I just think those are things that shouldn't be in a trans.

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:30 pm

there, that will suffice.

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PostSubject: Re: Satanic Shift   Sun Jun 22, 2014 5:15 pm

alright

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